Wow, great work on this. Short and unique. Love the image it brings to mind :)

Thanks for uploading!

There's something nice about this haiku

It makes me think of summer and it's boring, uneventful days

:)

Humorous. It's comical, but refreshingly creative!

This has to be one of my alltime favorite haiku's... I could picture the scene from the very first line.

11 words and 31 reviews.

This is really stunning.

xD It's hilarious, in my opinion XD

jesus christ, utilised like this, haiku is a bloody art form and no mistake.

why haven't you written since May? good god.

Depressing and very original.

Wonderful haiku. ;)

It was really different. I liked it!

beautiful!

asphalt is lovely to lay upon...the rough texture, the warmth from the heating of the sun.

i'd want to evaporate too, though, just to enjoy the sensation.

I love this. Excellent word choice, they fit so nice together. It's short but powerful.

awesome word choice and the imagery of her evaporating is amazing

i actually loved this. the last line did it for me, perfect. well done.