I think that this poem has a very lovely form. I agree that the ABAB rhyme scheme works.

Wow, I really liked this. You also use words other than the normal everyday ones. I liked that. I wonder, could there be an interesting story behind this? ...

Keep Writing
=)
CL

I like the rhyme scheme it works well for this poem. And the third stanza is my favorite, it's very true. keep it up :)

I kind of like this. It would have been more mysterious if your title hadn't given it away. But it was nice anyways. =)

That was spectacular!
Im deffinatley favoriting!
Plus, I love reviewing, so anything you need me to do for you i will. =)

oh MAN, ~E~ girl!! that was amazing!! that is deff. one of my favorites by you! i loved the rhyme scheme!! loved it!!

~Katt

love ya dahhlining!!