Excellent format. Well-written.

i enjoy this, especially the emphasis on time ticking away. i enjoy all of your poems though :D

guess we r all a little nuts ha ha love

their too small... they're

I love this piece.. the format is so awesome and the personification in the last stanza is amazing... very powerful and beuatifully written piece

Wow, simply amazing. i absolutely love the imagery and powerful lines. Beautifully written. Great last line! Keep writing! :) -Sara

Wow, this is powerful. I like the way you arranged it. Very interesting.

Zomgsh... first of all I want to say...


CHEESE. xD

Section i. is so beautiful. I loved all of it, but that part was definitely my favorite.

k.X

Wow, just wow. I love it (always do)
This is exactly what i think about when i think about Kristina, when i think about all that's happened in the past.
Once again, the perfect brilliance u claim u don't have is shining through.

Wow. Intense. Your word choice is perfect; so brutal. Incredibly written. This is going on my favorites. Excellent work!

I love it...It's so freggin awesome