I like the subtle rhyming here, and the ideas are very original. Good job )

I love the concept you have in this piece. Well done.

Arafax

WOW... I'm speechless, that is amazing

Oh. Wow. I remember in...I think it was seventh grade, there was this whole fad about signing your name with a circle around it instead of a heart because "hearts can break, but circles go on forever and ever". Anyways, this reminded me of that.

Nice write, although you repeat yourself a little, and not in the way that helps the poem.

Rowan.

This one is interesting, but a little repetitive. Not in a specific way, just a not-quite-perfect way. It's quite poignant nonetheless.

I love this; its such a clever idea. First of all, with the heart meaning life not love - if you think about it that is really true. And then the whole comparision to a circle was great, although I think you could spruce up the language a little bit so it reads better.

very nice. i like it _ its very different and shows connections to similar things. D