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| Let It Rain 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It was a little offbeat, in a good way. Great ending lines. And, of course, good overall message. I know where you're coming from. |
| Perfectly Paradox 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseYou have a very interesting mind, I must say. I really like the first stanza. Especially the idea of creatures clumped together because of their similar mistakes. Very nice. The paradoxical issue of man vs. nature with the whole hair dryers vs. natural beauty... cool element. Loved the sarcasm that drips the last stanza. Well done. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI love the description of the girls. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. Sorry it took so long to get back with you. I'm not really up for R&Ring. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Ariel of Wonderland 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, I like your choice of diction. It adds coherence. I also get the kind of girls you're talking about. >.< Oh vey. In the end, the attempt does matter though, doll. ^_^ Good poem, and the last line clinched the poem. Whoo! |
| SirScott 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseIn the end nothing matters. Well, if there is an end. ~SirScott |
| Drallimer 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abusethis is really good i know who it's about... you're right though you explained it really well and your word choices were really powerful |