Ugh... two gay guys making out. gross. Anyways, I honestly think this is the best writing I have ever read from you. Awesome, really. The other stories had some typos and places where I could've killed you because there wasn't enough detail, but there was plenty of detail in this and NO TYPOS! kudos. kudos.

i'm-not-emo-just-talented

nyah, it was really cute. i liked it, i've been wanting to right a slash for a while now [im closet hardcore fan, haha.] you did really good on this! im definately add this to my favorites this was really good.

- pretty yuina

Not bad, not bad at all. As a shounen-ai author myself I can say that you did a good job. If was short, sweet and to the point good dialouge and description.

Congrats on that. Also, if you want to read a good shounen-ai, would you please check out Sacrifice? I get a lot of compliments on it and I'd like to know what you think as well.

It's hard to find people out there who like shounen-ai.

Great job! I really liked it! :) Very cute.

Heh heh, this story was cute. If only it had been longer.