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| Luna Turner 2007-11-15 ch 1,  | abuseUgh... two gay guys making out. gross. Anyways, I honestly think this is the best writing I have ever read from you. Awesome, really. The other stories had some typos and places where I could've killed you because there wasn't enough detail, but there was plenty of detail in this and NO TYPOS! kudos. kudos. ~ i'm-not-emo-just-talented |
| Abigail Cathleen 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusenyah, it was really cute. i liked it, i've been wanting to right a slash for a while now [im closet hardcore fan, haha.] you did really good on this!! im definately add this to my favorites~ this was really good. - pretty yuina |
| Melissa Norvell 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. As a shounen-ai author myself I can say that you did a good job. If was short, sweet and to the point good dialouge and description. Congrats on that. Also, if you want to read a good shounen-ai, would you please check out Sacrifice? I get a lot of compliments on it and I'd like to know what you think as well. It's hard to find people out there who like shounen-ai. |
| g0shawk 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I really liked it! :) Very cute. |
| Sendako 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseHeh heh, this story was cute. If only it had been longer. |