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This was really lovely, in a raw kind of way from the point of view of two people who have had to fight for so long...
"What about you she asked?"
should be "what about you?" she asked.

I like the speech...it's realistic, it's unpolished and you get a real sense of a weight of things behind the words that are left unsaid. It was brief and easy to read and I really did like it.

this makes me want to cry..
i love it

that's beautiful, really beautiful


very vague
but it sets the point in motion

It seemed like everyone had a broken heart these days.

this felt very thought-out. very well-written. probably one of your best pieces.

I miss you, too.