I really like this piece.

it's almost comic at first because "smells like rubber" seems such a strange thing to say about one's hands. But it kind of changes tone, and in the last four lines it seems both positive and angsty. Complex, nice work.

oh wow. i may be completely misreading this but it sounds like one person is bitter and the other hopelessly innocent and naive, and some incandescent crimson tragedy befalls them. i love it, whatever it means. "away from a child's reaching hand"... haunting, madcap imagery.

wondeful descriptions! by the way, thanks for adding me on your fave authors' list ;)

i like this a lot. im not really sure what the first part means unless it has something to do with condoms but idk. what i got out of it was him being all grown up and the other person being stuck in being a little kid but it's being taken away from them. just a thought :) anyways, i liked it. :)

I like this, the imagery is good, amazing...