I liked the ending line! very good

keep it up!

Kind of morbid in some way which isn't bad at all. I like the rag doll image.

nice poem

V.

thanks for your review

nice wrok. keep writing

The ending line amused me. I don't know if it was supposed to. Nice work.

Thank you so much for your review of "Unusual Dawn". I really appreciate it.

Have an excellent day.

Twilight Starr

I like this one. Very unique. Good word choice and well written. Nicely done!