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| Moondog Dozier 2007-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent sound and progression. I like how this remains about an instant, rather than balooning to the exterior concept of the connection. The title seems so simple, and yet it speaks to the situation so succinctly. The specifics of the situation work well, but it is the evident emotional bravery that corrals the readers interest. Great write. MD:77. |