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| review 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abusepowerful stuff this is. i find it really hard to write about Christian stuff...even though i DO believe. so kudos to you and all those other christian authors out there who actually are capable of writing like this. |
| you_no_me 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is a beautiful piece but it is much to long. People here do not like to read long stories or poetry. Let your talents show through a shorter version. Looking forward to reading more. |
| Needa S 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful work, Ninja. Keep up the great work. God Bless you. |
| Jeannie-Redd 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI love it. Good depiction although it jumps around a little, which made it a little difficult for me to follow but maybe it's just me :p. Keep up the good work. ~Jeannie-Redd |