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| she smolders 2007-11-08 ch 1,  | abuseI just love how the vocabulary you use adds to the depth of the emotions. It's a little confusing and more then a little amazing. I like this, and everything else you write. :) Take care. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is just perfect. Going on my favorites for making everything just work. Your images are always SO vivid and that's what I just adore about your writing. The first stanza of this . . . I don't even know what to say, it's so amazing. Incredible. You're definitely one of my favorite authors here. Keep writing! :) |
| painted.music 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abusekonban wa As always an excellent accomplishment. :) I particularly loved the first stanza: "my lioness... casually lethal... and ate deserted hearts..." :D Beautiful descriptions. Zaijen -Shan- |
| servatis-a-pereculum 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI love the descriptions of "honey-limbed,""casually lethal," and "communist-curved." Beautifully written! |