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| Le Pecore Nere 2008-02-20 ch 10,  | abuseVery nice :) The fight coming up sounds intense XD Can't wait for you next update, and you're doing great so far! Keep up the good work, UPDATE SOON!! ~->LPN |
| Le Pecore Nere 2007-11-17 ch 9, | abuse:O what a turn of events lol it's a great story :) b^-^d I love it. 10/5 rating. Keep up the good work. UPDATE SOON (if you can) |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-16 ch 8, | abuseinteresting, I got a little confused, but I'm sure it will all become clear soon enough. Keep it up. |
| Le Pecore Nere 2007-11-16 ch 8, | abuse:) wow you certaintly updated fast. I love this story, it's not like your typical vampire/werewolf war thing that seems to be so popular. I enjoy reading this, you're doing a great job. update soon! |
| Le Pecore Nere 2007-11-15 ch 7, | abuse:O what a shock wow this is a great story, keep up the good work, it's a great story :) UPDATE SOON (seriously) |
| Le Pecore Nere 2007-11-15 ch 6, | abusewow the action scenes are AMAZING, it's like you were born to write about vampires :) |
| Le Pecore Nere 2007-11-15 ch 5, | abusewow good chapter :) vampires are cool, and you've done a good job with the imagery, it's great. And what's going to happen with the other characers? I'll keep reading, onto the next chapter. |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-15 ch 7, | abusevery well written, you're doing a fantastic job at writing this, I especially like the beginning part of this, well done. keep it up ^^ |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-13 ch 6, | abuseAck, I'm a vampire ^^ lol, great chapter ^^ Keep it up |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-13 ch 5, | abusevery graphic, very nice. Love the plot and the amount of description you put in. |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-11 ch 4, | abusenice. Love the action scene, got plently of describing and such. Haven't really got a lot to say about it except keep up the good work. |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-11 ch 3, | abusegreat two chapters, sorry I didnt review earlier. I love the plot here, you've put in a lot more, and haven't just gone straight into the action parts. Keep it up ^^ |
| reno-xxxXXXxxx 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abusevery nice ^^ I love all the description in it, plenty of it. Looks like this could be quite interesting.. keep it up |