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StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-07-16 ch 5,	abuseI love vampires, and I am also loving this story. Lindsey is so sweet, and Ana and Chris are just adorable too. I can't wait to keep on reading and see what happens. You're an excellent- keep up the awesome work!! The one thing I found a little hard- I couldn't really see Lindsey or the uncle very well in my head. Maybe you should describe them a bit more. Otherwise, like I said, I'm loving this story!
StradiNette 2008-07-16 ch 5,	abuseThe story's good. It might flow better if it wasn't fueled almost entirely by dialogue though, and the chapters could stand to be a little longer. Have a good day ~Nette
Kidwiththecap 2007-11-10 ch 2,	abuseOk, you have detail NAILED, Amanda, NAILED TO THE WALL! I didn't find any grammer issues so far . . . but that's just me. The story seems to be going well so far. Not a lot has actually happened yet, so I don't know what to say . . . hmm . . . what could i type to fill up space . . . . . . guess what comes out next week? (laughs)
Kidwiththecap 2007-11-10 ch 1,	abuseI'm reviewing! Have I ever mentioned how much I love my crappy computer? Well anyway, I think though this chapter was short, it didn't seem it had lack of detail. You're detail is better. Some of the sentences didn't seem to flow right when I read them . . . I think you might have some grammer mistakes. I didn't look close enough to see what actually was . . .'cept you put "he" insted of "he'd" that kinda thing. Mrs. Jonitis makes us do grammer things every week . . . you know I don't even think I spelled her name right. The over all plot of the story seems great to me. There's a little mystery in it, like . . . what's this about? what's gonna happen . . . (dramatic music) PS. Guess what comes out next week?!!?
FallenAngelFromTheSky 2007-11-08 ch 1,	abusehehehehehehehehehe...thank god it's not the friends name...sorry...don't like the name Ethan! anyway, update soon please!

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