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| tree of life and shadow 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusethat's so pretty too! i love the way you write. i can totally identify with this. oh, and if you're going to be in NYC, you ought to see phantom of the opera (if you havent seen it already). |
| loversdream17 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you started and ended it. Great Job. Mand~4~life |
| CANDIDly shitfaced. 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyming is relative, but the lyrics are cliche and overused. It's nothing special. NT. |
| poisonedpassions. 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseI think this is well written. I can almost feel the passion and expression you put into these words. Very good, i have no critique. Keep it up:) |