Reviews for The game of hearts

caralita 2007-11-27 ch 1,	abuseI love this analogy.
IlfirinEstel 2007-11-26 ch 1,	abuseI think I love this poem. I love the first stanza and the lines 'I have this anti-poker-face that over-emotes/But the feeling has been sucked right out of me' and 'Baby, I am the black lady--/and sure, I'll give you more points/but in the end, you know you really don't want me.' I've been there before for both. Especially maybe the 'anti-poker face.' I just love that. And the last two lines are nice too. All of it hits really hard, as if you're biting the words or spitting them out like they're venom to hurt someone.
mizu no kokoro 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abusei like how you used the theme of cards to develop your feelings. your tone was well established. keep writing
painted.music 2007-11-08 ch 1,	abusekonban wa Wow, the imagery in this was absolutely BRILLIANT! You took one idea and rolled with it to the end. Beautiful. Perfect. :D Khudafis -Shan-