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| W. Griffin 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abusethe imagery in this poem provides a perect example of modern poetry at its best! please keep writing! -w. griffin |
| candylissa 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abusewow, this is is good. just a little confusing, but every poem should have a hidden meaning. you should keep on writing, you definitely have talent! |
| jadedmari 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. I like the mood that you set with your words, and the way that you painted a picture of the human heart and the thought process. Good job. |