Reviews for Behind our Waxen Masks

W. Griffin 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abusethis is excellent! the rhyming, unlike in many other poems (some of which by yours truly), is not at all forced! keep writing! -w. griffin
The Sleep Of Reason 2007-11-16 ch 1,	abuseI loved it And the essence I can't quite pin point why But keep writing!
The Mac Scribble 2007-11-12 ch 1,	abuseI think everyone writes a poem about people's masks in their lifetime, but yours is the only one I've ever read that ever pulled it off quite so perfectly. KUDOS!
jadedmari 2007-11-08 ch 1,	abuseI can relate to the theme of the story- it was very well written. Your use of the metaphor "this smiling face is just a doll" really sets a certain feeling of loneliness and loss of hope- like the person in the poem is beyond outside help.