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| fatbird33 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abusei think that this would make an interesting story. it may be a little cliche, but i think in romances there has to be cliches, because if there isn't any, then it can't be a romance. you get what i'm trying to say? |
| Tombstone Angel 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abuseHi! Its Emma! :D Aka Miss Annoying I think it should be the boy corrupt the girl more heart breaking! :D |
| almathea 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abuseI like where it's going so far. I think they should both corrupt the other a bit. For instance, you can't try to change a good-girl into a wild-child without being changed a little yourself in the process. Also, if you do mutual corrupting, you only have to worry about writing one story. Good luck with it! |
| almathea 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI think this would make a great story. I'd read it. :) |
| Skeeter the Groundhog 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusewhenever someone reads and reviews one of my stories, i try to make a habit of reading theirs in return, so here's my thank you. this is good, it definitely builds up suspense. this could potentially make a great story if you use it as a prologue and insure that everything in the prologue carries over into the story. good job and thanks! -Skeeter the Groundhog |
| blademkcay 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseheya ash! Wow, this is pretty crazy! if you wanted to make a story out of it i would love to read it! keep workin' hard! luv ya! Matara |