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TopKat
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abusethat was just really...good to read. made me smile. especially the situation at the beginning, because surprisingly, i have been there. blarg. wish i'd had the ending, too, though ;D

loved the last line, too. i laughed out loud :D

~Katie
Catseye*Rose
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseHa, that was cute. And this is why you talk to people you're attracted to: so you don't attack them in the library. Although that's fun, too. XD
Renae K
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseI just had to write and tell you that this story is pretty much how my husband and I got together (Well, almost): A year apart in university courses, awkward conversations, fumbling meetings in the library at exam time (always at exam time! ...as we rushed to photocopy things and read things we should have read months earlier), and about two years later, we eventually went on a bloody date! (No kisses in the library for us, unfortunately!) Anyway, OTHER than that, this was great! Love the attention to detail and your vivid and witty observations throughout. Wonderful stuff.
Kitsune Luvr
2008-04-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww. So cute. Once again, loved it.
sicca-chan
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseLol! It just too cute. Loved it!
Amindaya
2007-12-13
ch 1,
abuseThat is just cute. Great tension.
erasmuss
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseLoved it. Loved it loved it loved it.
Hm. I wish I could write like that, I just dodnt have the patience.
F-ing brilliant in my opinion, and a good length too.
Favorite stories list I think. ^^
Narcotic Affliction
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuseThat's hot.
Mademoiselle Rouge
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseYou are SO going into my favorite authors list.
Just finished an essay. And damn I hate footnotes, quotes, and having to bring back a book at the library at 10am the next morning when you've spent all the previous day reading it and writing about it.

That story is really good, by the way :) Loved it. Love the way you describe their attraction.
MUMSI
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseGah! Damnit. Everytime I see an update or new story from you I have to tell myself-do your work first, do your work first-but I never do!

And now my mind is blown. You've blown it like a dirty dirty wh...er. I'll stop that sentence.

So now I can't use it. Thanks. It's trying to recover from its post-orgasmic haze, and it doesn't feel like doing any work.

Wonderful characters once again. Wonderfully original setting in an unoriginal setting-er. That make sense? Whatever.

Making me a mess once again, mami.

Favorited like wo!
Esquirella
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseVery cool, this one! LOVED it!
Sychaeus
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseNow i'm NEVER going to pass these damn exams =P
Every time i go to the library now i'll be thinking of this fic, and that is not conducive to studying, ma'am.
*fans self*
Verra nice. I liked it. So much frustration, so very well written. The beginning was especially gorgeous.
*hearts*
- Sy
mandraco
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseI hate libraries. They're so stifling and well... I think I have a phobia of them. Thankfully, taking a computer science degree means I never have to set foot in one, all up I've been into the university library maybe four times spending probably less than ten minutes in there total, and always accompanied by someone else.

Anyway, my question is, why didn't they just christen the stacks like everyone else does?

Otherwise, interesting story. I'm glad it's a one shot. It all works out neatly.

=) Mandraco.
LandUnderWave
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseCute. :D *applauds* I've never been to a university library, but the one at Heartland Community College(where my mom works) uses the same system. It's hella confusing.

Oh, and on a totally unrelated note, the third chapter of Denizen (with multiple revisions) is up! And a new oneshot. Thanks!

Lilz
Sekre
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseCute!
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