Better then the first poem, mind you the last one was good too, and it was just awsome. It was smooth and simple. Nice work once again.

Maggot.

Nice work. I was creeped out, not by the poem, but the first time I was reading the word 'Ruin' my song came on that is named 'Ruin' by Lamb of God. Scary but pleasent, good work.

Maggot.