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Quitisential Bee
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abuseHey, this is good. Nice work. I wanted to critisize it, but I like it too much. The last three lines in specific...I like 'em.

and damn, that was quick, I posted that one you reviewed (thanks!) about ten minutes ago.
RavensIvy
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseWow. That is deep, and awesome. Great poem.
lisaslife
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuseI love the description in this, it is very vivid. The entire poem is relatable to many.
Michelladora
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abusethis is amazing. i understand the feeling one hundred percent. :)
simpleplan13
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseI like the descriptions and I really like the ending
losing gracie girl
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseits sad.
i hope this person realizes how (no offense) useless/hopeless u seem without them. good luck.

(i had that problem too...)

yours until the wind changes,
Lost
Kaleidoscope23
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseI really like this poem. I can relate to it a lot. Good work!
Finwe
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful and rich with emotion. I don't know what else I could say.
kloun doll
2007-11-15
ch 1,
abusethe rhyme is good.
silentscreamer07
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseYay! You posted it! *woot* I'm glad you did! I remember reading this one...shoo..how long ago was it? You do so good with your poems! And I remember I really liked this one. Specially since its about love..something I don't really relate to..and i don't usually like reading about them..but you manage to write them really well! And you can really tell the emotion! *bravo* Keep writing! I hope you keep posting too! ^_^
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