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| Natalie Millan 2007-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseReally cute and fun story!! There's even a moral lesson!! Good one. |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseAnd just who couldn't love Ka-Chanski? I'll have to admit that the summary really interested me: "the greatest dancing robot ever to walk the earth." Maybe it was just a little joke, but it's been forever since I read something as humorous as that on this site! I loved the story, too. Bad, bad Doctor Foster! It shows the effect greed can have on people. Anyways, I quite enjoyed this little story and its little dancing robot. I also enjoyed the moral to it. "and no matter how hard greedy Doctor Foster tried, he could never make another robot as great as Ka-Chanski." Great ending! ;) |