Aw!! That was absolutely adorable..especially the title. Great job. :)

I thought that was a really interesting short-- nice. :) Fluffy, sweet... I loved how you made such a fast-moving story take place over a longer period of time by tagging in "four days earlier." Awesome touch there. ^^

G'job! :)
~HawkDancer

Aw, so adorable! I ABSOLUTELY love this. :) WONDERFUL awesomeness!

toffeecakesxox.

adorable!

short and simple. thanks kristina!

Aw that was adorable. Lol. I especially love that last line ;D

Never let fear get into the way of you posting your stories, because they're amazing. This is another one of my favorites, mainly because I've already fallen in love with Heath and his nonexistent butt. =)

Hahaha...I'm addicted to your stories!! Especially your one-shots!

Your Fan,
Operationiva

This is a very decent one-shot. I wouldn't worry. :) The story is really well-told, and it does in fact sound like something that would happen in real life. The reactions and interactions are very much believable.

This was so cute!
I wish life was like that. :[

i love this! it was a great oneshot. short and sweet.

Oh! Reminds me of when my friend accidentally said she loves someone when she meant to put 'you' instead of 'I'. It got printed out and we chased her around bugging her about, it was hilarious! Cute story!

Umm...
well,well,well.
i loved ur story it was great i find it very interesting and tht type of shyt.
yeah u should a story about me.

oh this story is soo true! omg i love it..Im soo glad you wrote it and if I could rate this story from 1 to 10...I would give you a 100,0,0! I have this guy that i like and now that you made it clear..I feel as if Is hould let him know. Cause it is true that guys are just as shy as girls sometime..thank you once again great story!

Aw...that was SO INSANELY awesome!