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| thecolourgrey 2007-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseI've read dethroned princess and the path stained crimson...the latter was really sad and tragic, especially the last two lines. This poem seems to be full of anger. As this seems to be from personal experience, I couldn't really comment on it except that you carry the point and feeling acroos very well. |