I really liked this. It was especially nice to see you turn the entire poem around at the end. I felt that this illustrated the hope that keeps many of us going on really well.

Thankfully though, love isn't just an illusion. Great work with this one.

Fragile ending :) Even though I would have the term love interchanged with in-love or in-fatuation, the ending was well twisted around :) good job

Beautiful

I rather liked this. I enjoyed how it started off cynical and ended on a hopeful note.

Keep writing!