Oy vey, when will we get you people back to writing HAPPY poetry? ha ha. But it was muchas good anyways. I liked the imagery of on the one hand, the light and love fading away, and on the other hand the anger coming out and the blood starting to spill...

"Bleeding Tears
Crying fears"

I liked that line a lot, for some reason (maybe I'm a sucker for clever rhymes?)