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| Alpha de la Omega 2007-11-09 ch 1,  | abuseNot sure I like it. I like vampire stories or poems (although I have only written two), but this seems to be too obvious or typical. I don't mean to sound negative because I know you tried, but I just didn't find it gripping. Maybe you should try being more descriptive or put yourself deeper into the character(s) of the poem. |