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| Unbeknownst 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseAbsolutely wonderful. :) |
| Stella-Polaris 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love this! You are sure to win the challenge! Good Luck! |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-26 ch 2, | abuseNice poem. "She whispers softly, “fool”."--great line. Anyway, I wish the first part of this post could be continued because I think it would be great. Good work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this beginning. Ah, the poser. That was great. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| TheUnknownMarauder 2007-11-15 ch 2, | abuse... Why is this called pennies? |
| Ladybugg13 2007-11-15 ch 2, | abuseWhy have I read this before? Did you post it previously, take it down, and post it again? If you haven't posted this before I just had MAJOR de ja vu. Anyway, I love this poem. Really nice imagery. Not quite sure if I get it though, but i have an idea, and theres a little story in my head that had bloomed because of it. (well, more like a scene, but whatever) I loved when poem makes me do that. This goes in the favorite for sure. -Bugg |
| TheUnknownMarauder 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseA bit odd, but very good. Um... Love the details. Technically, this is not a drabble (a drabble is defined as a fanfiction of exactly 100 words). |
| Burnt Bread 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI like how you've managed to capture a character in this short, 800 word piece. She's desperate, but unclassy (that bit is portrayed very well. The lipstick on the teeth, her stocking... the use of small details makes better reading) and I can't help but feel a bit sorry for her. The take on the topic is also intriguing. The whole thing grows on me. Well done. Bread |
| friend 49 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuse"He doesn’t bother to point out her smudged eyeliner, orange foundation or motorway blusher." Haha I like that part. Good way to get the image in there. "“My girlfriend,” he begins in his strong accent, “is Swiss, and of German descent. When she had been studying her French for a week, she sounded a lot better than you do now.”" That's kind of mean, but that's okay, she's annoying. :) Okay so I don't quite understand this yet. But it is intriguing! Looking forward to more! |