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Reviews For: Neon Glass
Kusje 2007-11-16 . chapter 1
The last line made it beautiful :)

Great job on this. Even though there was little to say, I felt it all.
rust phoenix 2007-11-12 . chapter 1
I like this a lot. Very creative format, and unique wording.
Dale Christopher 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
I really liked the word use here. The title was also very clever. Well written haiku.

Peace, Daze
windy girl 2007-11-10 . chapter 1
Is the locket breaking the mirror? Or is the mirror metaphorical? I'm a little confused (and it's a little too late for me...). Anyway, I like it. For some reason, I thought of Vanity Fair. Pretty haiku. :)

-pb
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