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| Kusje 2007-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseThe last line made it beautiful :) Great job on this. Even though there was little to say, I felt it all. |
| rust phoenix 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. Very creative format, and unique wording. |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the word use here. The title was also very clever. Well written haiku. Peace, Daze |
| windy girl 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseIs the locket breaking the mirror? Or is the mirror metaphorical? I'm a little confused (and it's a little too late for me...). Anyway, I like it. For some reason, I thought of Vanity Fair. Pretty haiku. :) -pb |