Reviews for The Time Stone Clock:

Reviews For: The Time Stone Clock:

ThreeBlackRoses 2008-01-15 ch 19,	abuseThaveresko- still dislike him (that is the pint, after all), but he did redeem himself slightly. Aboschi- deserved every medal of honor known to the people of every realm by the end of this story. I have begun thinking of it as a she, so, regardless of whatever gender you decide it is, she will be female to me. Nagondre- deserves a sequel as much as any character I've ever read. By the end, I could almost she Thaveresko actually coming to love her though... Qualtaru- She started the story with such power, that I expected her to have a little more backbone throughout. Nevertheless, she had tremendous potential as a character and filled her role beautifuly. Errozick- Once again, after the intro I would have loved to see more of him. Besides Aboschi he was easily my favorite character. I'm sorry to spam you with a super-review, but I wanted to finish the story first. To have been written in a month or otherwise, this is a work of art. Far from perfect, perhaps. But that's a damn sight nearer than some people ever get. You may feel free to ignore my advice/comments/crituques, as I am hardly an absolute expert on literature. Neverhteless, this is easily the best story I have read on fictionpress, and I have read a lot of stories in my time. Congratulations on finishing a NaNoWriMo novel and excellent work. ThreeBlackRoses
ThreeBlackRoses 2008-01-06 ch 9,	abuseI am finding that I intensley dislike Thaveresko's character, but that only makes me want to read on more, hoping that he'll get his due in the end. When the priests speak, does the "Zyoh" mean anything in particular, or is it simply a habit of speech?
ThreeBlackRoses 2008-01-06 ch 5,	abuseOh, daring. I, personally, would not want to dissasemble a travlers carriage within hearing distance if I could in any way, shape, or form help it, but that's just me. Still got me hooked.
ThreeBlackRoses 2008-01-06 ch 4,	abuseAnd I though Spanish verb conjugations were confusing! Imagine, havin six words for one concepts, almost synonyms but not quite...your making my brain hurt! This was probably the best of the chapters so far, as the plot is picking up now. Congratulations on another spectacular chapter.
ThreeBlackRoses 2008-01-06 ch 3,	abuseI loved this chapter as well. My only critique would be to not announce their proffesions to blandly (so-and-so, the such-and-such) but rather to "show" their talents and work it into the story. Although, given that you had a month to write all of this, this is absolute fiction gold. The Absolver is by far my favorite character thus far.
ThreeBlackRoses 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. It was well written, and I am fairly well and interested. Certainly a dynamic prolouge, ne? It's Evermore Reality/Kopy Kat. Thought I'd skip over to this side of the track and see what kind of mischief dear Amilyi was getting into. ThreBlackRoses

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