Great one-shot! =) I can totally relate to Sylvia's fear of cockroaches. =P I mean, those icky creepy-crawlers are just nasty! XD I could hardly control myself from puking out the chocolate brownies I was munching on while I read this story! I never should have ate those brownies...BAD MISTAKE! XD Anywho, this one-shot is wonderful and I totally enjoyed it! Keep up the good work! =D

p.s. I'm definitely giving you a THUMBS UP 4 this awesome one-shot! =P

Awesome read :D
Sorry to hear about the plagiarism, your stories are wonderful :(

EW! when you described the cockroaches, i could actually imagine it since i've seen tons of them before (with their own white blood squirting out). but i was laughing at that haha.

another one of my faves with another great plot! you come up with really interesting plots, i just love em.

Very cute oneshot! I loved it! Syl and Tim's relationship was totally believable, and I loved the recurring theme of cockroachy evil. XD I hate them, too, believe me. :)

SOPAH cute!

-Kristy. :) // toffeecakesxox.

that was one of the funniest stories i've read in a while.
Good job

You managed to transform icky creepy-crawlers into subjects of absolute fluff.
YOU ARE MY HERO.
And that's coming from someone who's not a big fan of cockroaches. ;D

I don't mind cockroaches, so it was hard to get her fear at first. But otherwise, it's pretty good, though the last part was too cheesy for my liking. Though the cockroach in the milo - awesome.

Holy cow! I thought I was the only person on earth! I mean, all my friends are scared of spiders but kill and pick up cockroaches like it's easy, while I'm in the corner freaking out. It doesn't help that I live in South Carolina and they call them 'Palmetto bugs' and because of the region I live in, we have one visit like once a month. God I hate cockraoches! They are just disgusting. I wish they'd just keel over, die, and suddenly evaporate.
Oh wait, i'm supposed to be reviewing your story.. oops... sorry... um
Like your other oneshots, this was utterly adorable. You are like the goddess of oneshots. I seriousely love you for it. I hope you write even more, because they are perfect! I also hope that you never have to see a cockroach again. eww... *shudders*

~LaughingWaterSpirit~

I HATE bugs in general and I can only imagine how she would feel. This was another great one-shot~Angela

aw! loved it!

some writers on FP have one or two good one-shots. but yours are gems - all of them.

me again :)
anyway you have NO IDEA how paranoid I am right now because of that story. I'm seriously curled up in my chair randomly search the room for cockroaches. lol.
but anyways that was (another) really cute story. I was afraid to read it (one mention of cockroaches=I'm out of there. or any bug at all, really. -shiver-) but I read it anyway because I know that all your oneshots are AMAZING :) and it was good even if I will now be paranoid for the rest of the night... lol. anyway nice job again!

“But… I wanted to drink it.”
definitely.. definitely... the best line EVER.that was so so so cute, funny, and fluffy. cockroaches scare the hell out of me (im still shuddering) but who knew what kind of lovely story it would make? haha, love this :3

Very cute. Good job!

Okay, I couldn't resist. I googled 'cockroach,' and I pretty much wanted to puke. Remind me never to do that again.

[Now I hope you understand that Tim is italicized in the “I hate him” sense, not in the “Oh hot guy hot guy” sense.] Haha. I'll admit, I've done that before.

[when I spied Tim’s gang making our way to us.] M, I think the wording is just a little off, here. 'Our' implies that the narrator is with Tim's gang, which she isn't. Maybe just change it to something like, '...when I spied Tim's gang making their way over to us,' or '...spied Time's gang heading towards us.'

[That was when I decided that drumming was going to be the love of my life.] By this point, I couldn't help but smile. What a great line.

The story was adorable, simply put. I've tried to write oneshots, but they all end up as multiple-chapter stories; I just have too much to say! It's nice to read really good short pieces every now and again, and this was definitely entertaining. I can see why it was nominated for SKoW :-) Good luck, by the way!

Cheers,
Sammy