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| The Scholar at Large 2007-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseCool, it was amazingly um philosophical. You might want to change the second sentence though; the plural noun bumblebees and the singular verb drones disagree, so you will have to change one or the other. Other than that, I loved it, good luck with collage. :) |