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hann 2009-11-18 . chapter 21
one of the best fanfics. :) on my top 10 list now!
A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-10-24 . chapter 21
that ould be funny wedding on a beach is normal but instead of a white dress a white bikini hahaha let me guess cause its easier to take off on the night?lolz
A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-10-24 . chapter 12
ha suk it bitch shouldnt have lied to him
Gentle. Edge. 2009-08-19 . chapter 1
Interesting start but it seemed like there was more information than there was a hook. It's nice to know about the characters and theirs pasts but if nothing really makes me want to read more (I will though because I have a feeling it'll get much more interesting). However, it was really nicely written and I'm sure Sicily and Lucas will be up to some mischief which I'm looking forward to.
animegirl214 2009-07-28 . chapter 21
haha! aw!~ i loved it! and i still do! :P
thanks for the wonderful and cute story!! :D :D :D
strawberrycrush 2009-07-09 . chapter 21
awesome story...!...
The characters looked real...

Lucas ans Sicily were great...!!

luv
: ))
xN00DLES 2009-07-08 . chapter 21
Aw, what a cute ending. :3
I think I have a girl-crush at Sicily, lol. She's kind of awesome. I absolutely love the fact that she's not like those other fictionpress-romance girls. You know, those quiet, shy, nervous types. WE NEED MORE GIRLIES LIKE SICILY!!
THeUNNamED 2009-07-06 . chapter 21
AW =) I loved your story! great job!
twinklegirl19 2009-06-14 . chapter 21
love the story! especially Sicily and Lucas, great job on it, can't wait for your future stories!
Erica71167 2009-01-29 . chapter 21
This is a great story! I really enjoyed it! They were adorable together. Great job!
silentscream4luv 2008-12-17 . chapter 21
I totally love this story...
Ravina 2008-11-29 . chapter 21
I'm slowly working my way through your writing, and I liked this one as well!

I liked how you were merciless about Sicily's bitchiness and Lucas' egoistic tendencies - it was nice to read something where the characters don't apologize for their flaws, and you managed to make the characters lovable even with their attitude. Skills! ;)

Just because I can be a grammar fiend, I feel obliged to mention that there are little, irritating mistakes every once in awhile, but I can't really complain because they were minor and didn't hurt the story. I think in a few places you had "your" instead of "you're", so that's one thing you should watch out for in the future.

But overall, kudos to you and to your beta!

- Rebekah
book.babe15 2008-11-16 . chapter 21
loved it!
insanity-ward 2008-10-03 . chapter 21
omg! i am so sorry for not reviewing sooner! but it's over! wow. amazingly wicked awesome story! and i can asure you that Sicily and Lucas will forever be in my mind.

and the reason for that being (other than the fact that they're apart of this story of course) during the course of reading this story and a few others, my mind took the main female leads of each story and created an extended version of all your stories. These female characters are: Sicily from this story, Taliana Avilla from Once upon a one night stand; Lindsay Farmer from The Town where toes were sucked; Zahra Kingsley from Humiliation for the Heart; Riley Walters from Takeoffs & Landings; and Ava (i don't know her last name) from Sweet Addiction: Just one Touch.

I have this whole alternative story about them, almost like an extended version of their respective stories. if you would ever like to know more about my mind's story, just ask. i don't want to say now cuz this review would be to long if i did.

k, well. I LOVED YOUR STORY! absolutely fantasic! until next time! =]
I Murder on Impulse 2008-09-21 . chapter 21
BRILLIANT STORY!
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