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| Hanban 2008-07-12 ch 21,  | abuseOMG! THE STORY JUST FINISHED. :( And I'm super-duper sorry if I hadn't reviewed on the previous chappies. Apparently, college reviews got the best of me. But oh em gee once again, since this story makes me teary-eyed. Alas, I AM a romantic at heart. I also want a gift from Victoria's Secret! LOL And there was some bit of typos I saw. You committed 'homonym error' (gasp). Okay, I'm just kidding with the gasping part. If I'm not mistaken, I saw you write "our" instead of "are" which is the correct term. I think it's in the chap wherein Lucas asked Sicily to his dance? Haha. And BTW, are you also preparing for the college exams? Or will you study in the US? OR, are you not yet a senior? Hehe. Okay. Somehow I've stuffed most of my thoughts in a single review and I hope you won't kill me for not reviewing in the other chappies. I'm really cramped with homework. :( Okay! I'll be waiting for the new story you've been talking about in a previous chappie. xoxo, Hanban (lol gossip girl much?) PS How many times have I used the word 'chappie'? Hahaha. |
| iminluv 2008-07-11 ch 21, anon. | abusei think you should publish this story,its ah-mazing! |
| faithful.dream 2008-07-08 ch 20, | abusei just love this chapter ! especially this part. Another crazy idea came to her mind. “Maybe I should break more of your body parts.” “Sure,” he replied, sticking his tongue out at her. “Just not my heart.” With that, everyone knew what Sicily and Lucas needed - privacy - and so, everyone, the two excluded of course, got up from his or her seat and started walking to the ocean as they threw sand at each other and didn’t bother spying or eavesdropping on the two ex-archrivals who were busy staring longingly at each other, hands clasped together. they are the cutest thing EVER ! |
| BabyLily 2008-07-05 ch 3, | abuseAs usual, he didn’t take the action of hers seriously and just simply shrugged it off with his shoulders. This confuses me, i mean come on, what else would he shrug with? |
| swimerchick 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abusei love your story! it was awesome i love sicsly(hah i can't even spell her name) and luke! they're just the cutest! i loved it can't believe it's finished! ~swimmerchick~ |
| daling 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseno.. its finish? but it was soo good... lol. anyway..thank you soo much for the story! love it always! n im pretty sure i'll love your other story as well! xD |
| blondansmart716 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseyee!! loved it! they are just too cute :D |
| LadyKaurie 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseOh it's over. It was a good story! Good work. But I'd like to point out, right at the end of the chapter, i got totally confused. You said "Adrienne" instead of Sicily. Anyway, i loved it. Take care. x |
| midnightbeauty 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseAw! Such a cute ending... I am definitely sad the story's over, because I'll miss all of the characters, especially Sicily and Lucas, but I think your ending was great :) I can't wait to see your next story, and I'm sure I'll love the characters, just like I loved these ones! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| CATpuccino. 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseaw finally it ends. I'm a bit sad actually ;) btw there is a typo i think. The last paragraph you typed Adrienne instead of Sicily. GREAT STORY! |
| I'm the Evil Twin 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseAndrienne?? who's Andrienne? |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuseYour welcome! i really loved your story so i am glad i was here from begining to end. |
| amaryllisfaye 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abusewhat a wonderful epilogue :) wish there was more kisses but this was lovely nonetheless. i look forward to reading Bleeding Love! |
| SimplyBelievingJan 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abusethe whole story is awesome. i really enjoyed reading it. but i think you'd like to know that you wrote adrienne instead of sicily in the end. but all in all, i think it's really good and i hope you'd write more stories. :) |
| under the bed 2008-07-05 ch 21, | abuse^_^ Perfect. There's just the issue of the name thing in the last paragraph, where you wrote 'Adrienne.' |