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| Always Pencil 2008-05-17 ch 10,  | abuseAww. That was so cute. |
| GrannyP 2008-05-17 ch 10, | abuseWow, it's been a while since I have seen this story around. Glad to see that everything worked out with the STD scare. The frog thing at the end was kind of weird... I don't know what that was all about... |
| Instant Ninja 2008-02-19 ch 9, | abuseWow. This is just...really sweet, and beautiful. *hugs* Thank you. |
| Always Pencil 2008-01-15 ch 8, | abuseWow. I loved this chapter. Seemed so real. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-01-13 ch 9, | abusepoor Amanda. first her ex is being an **, then the test. poor julie too. good chappy tho. |
| GrannyP 2008-01-13 ch 9, | abuseScary first experience. I think those doctors are supposed to be better at making you feel more comfortable in that kind of situation. Anyway, the whole STD thing was a pretty shocking addition to the story, but we get a little bit more insight into Julie's past. Nice chapter! |
| Rayne 2008-01-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseScary crash... Not fun, I'm sure. But still very much with the cuteness. Love it! Keep it going. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-01-07 ch 8, | abusewere you in a crash like that? cause that doesn't sound fun. is that the end? it kinda sounds like the end. anywho, good chappy!! |
| GrannyP 2008-01-04 ch 8, | abuseI didn't see that coming at all! Very nice surprise to add to the story. I have never been in a wreck, so that was all very dramatic for me. Nice job with another chapter! |
| bright-silver-star 2007-12-30 ch 5, | abusecould you send me the full chapter please? i love the story |
| Rayne 2007-12-29 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis really got me crying. But once again an amazing chapter. And yay for Polo shirts! keep up the work. I love reading this story. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-12-28 ch 7, | abuseha ha! she likes looking like a guy **! poor Amanda!! really sux that she hurt Julie so much! good chappy! |
| GrannyP 2007-12-28 ch 7, | abuseThat fight seemed to escalate rather quickly. Julie must be REALLY sensitive in that area. Nice job. |
| Always Pencil 2007-12-28 ch 7, | abuseAww. Their first real fight. I hope Amanda can keep her promise. It's been a while since you updated this story and I'm glad I got to read more. Now you should finish it. |
| Always Pencil 2007-12-22 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter. Very realistic. Loved it. MORE! |