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Reviews For: Tales From The Cantina: Part Two

IntelligentNonsense
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseHrm...make sure that where you're describing Virvel and JW that you give all charecters the same amount of description as the others. Like JW, I have no idea what kind of man to picture in my head. Or if he's even a man. Maybe he's a boy. I wouldn't know by reading this story.

Other than that, good work.
jmcalmei
2007-12-06
ch 1,
abuseZiffeh, this seriously conjured a grin on my face!
Seattle grunge-love
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseA guy in my Creative writing class wrote a story with a guy named JW too...who is JW?? Why does everyone keep referring to this man?

On a better note, although I again wasn't sure who the characters are, they made me laugh. A lot. ^_^ You're very good at capturing humor.
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