Reviews for Tales From The Cantina: Part Two

IntelligentNonsense 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseHrm...make sure that where you're describing Virvel and JW that you give all charecters the same amount of description as the others. Like JW, I have no idea what kind of man to picture in my head. Or if he's even a man. Maybe he's a boy. I wouldn't know by reading this story. Other than that, good work.
jmcalmei 2007-12-06 ch 1,	abuseZiffeh, this seriously conjured a grin on my face!
Seattle grunge-love 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseA guy in my Creative writing class wrote a story with a guy named JW too...who is JW?? Why does everyone keep referring to this man? On a better note, although I again wasn't sure who the characters are, they made me laugh. A lot. ^_^ You're very good at capturing humor.