Reviews for Don't Trade Your Legs For A Pair Of Wings

felicia13 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseIt's so final. Truly, this is the last jorio. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to catch up to these that I missed, but it seems more appropriate to read them now. And I'm feeling more in the spirit of the joria, which seems intertwined in my head with the feeling of deep winter. These you can only read when there's four feet of snow outside of your window. And I love how the title goes along with the poem. Fitting, really. Felicia.
Orly 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abusei dont get it. what does it have to do with wings and legs? ;/
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-11-11 ch 1,	abuseOh, this reminds me of the song "Elsewhere" by Sarah McLachlan. I'm not sure if you're familiar with the song, but it's my favorite song of hers (one of my favorite songs of all time, really) and the chorus definitely is a lot like this joria. Beautiful and oh so true. Favoriting for making me think of a gorgeous song. Keep writing! :)
Smoky Bear 2007-11-10 ch 1,	abusevery profound! the whole thing is like a 21st century proverb. beautiful work.