Reviews for The Life Everlasting

Oracle of Destiny
2007-11-10
ch 1,

abuseThis is brilliant so far. It kinda reminds me of the film Firewall with Harrison Ford for some strange reason - maybe it's cos of the breaking in part I think :)

It's interesting that both characters have magi powers so it's a bit like Harry Potter but much interesting and adult. I liked how you developed Trianus and Astrain and I can say that Astrain is a bit older and experienced than him - well that's my impression of it. A part of me wonders why they are breaking in the uni as it's one of the top ten universites. I'm currently listening to the song Angel by Massive Attack and it really fits in with the story. Don't ask me why cos I haven't got a clue lol.

I hope you continue with this and the best of luck with this. Just now I've starting posting things on here and even my own story called Destiny and I: A New Man.

Anyway this sounds interesting so far and please update :) Oh and by the way, thanks for reviewing my story too xD

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