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| onlysesshomaru26 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseOMG! I commend you on this one shot...wow...this is exactly how a one shot should be...omg I cant stop smiling lol that was great...great job |
| Gavia Immer 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseGood story! I never realised Sara was a cat until the last second, so good job on that. I always fear that people will figure out the twists in my story before they actually happen. |
| BatsintheBellfry 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusevery misleading! I laughed when I reaad that last part, it was really good, and well written too. |
| Laurent Ward 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseLoved the twist at the end, it was rather clever. All in all, I feel incredibly sorry for Lacey; that's a horrible thing to happen. Anyway, nice job. It's well written and engaging. Keep it up. |
| Kar-zid 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAW, poor cat. Good story, very touching! |
| Ryan L. Covey 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseVery clever twist there. Kind of like something Joe R. Lansdale would write (though you probably don't know who he is) Just a very well thought out story all around. |
| Cirien Phoenix 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was quite a surprise that it was a cat. Oh, but that was so sad, I really love cats. They're my fave animals. Still, this was excellently written, so I'll add it to my faves! ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for your review on "All You Once Knew is Lost"! I'm not dropping the story, but I haven't updated because I have college, work, and I'm still trying to maintain a social life. Quite hard to do. I'm thrilled to see you love it, and be sure you keep checking back every so often for updates. They'll come eventually! :D |
| V.R.M. 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseCat? That confused me, perhaps you meant dog. Anyways that mom has really got to sort out her priorities. Reminds me a little of my grandmother! Gruesome! A little girl! It was depressing! I'm speechless and on the verge of tears (hyperbole). All I can ask is, what happens next...? |
| blue ruin 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseCreepiness |
| Sweet Lemon Effect 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseWell now. While the fact that it was a cat was nice surprise, that story is horrible. Not horrible as in badly written, but horrible as in, OMG, poor sara. Oh well, it is a tragedy/horror. This is a good job then. |