So you're capable of writing happy poems after all. (Just kidding.)

It's beautiful. I always like your strong images and your metaphors...checkerboards to diamond rings... I wish I could write like you.

It's very pretty.

true. life is a game.

and you can't always, win.

good write

keep it up!

Aw this is very cute and well written, I like it a lot, good job with your imagery.

aww i like this one. very creative, i wish i wasnt so preoccupied ive been slacking off on reviewing and writing. sorry hun :(