good story. Update soon please.

You're doing good with the story. The plot is interesting and the writing is favorable. You're able to keep a person intrigued. I'd like to see what you want to keep doing with it.

zomg plzz u must continue i wish to know what happens u are a great wrighter i wish i could wright like u

It's really interesting and you left it at a cliff hanger, so I'd like more, please!

I wonder if Leo is really dead and what will happen to Ari.

I also like that it's a quick read, no long paragraphs XD.

Um, well, um, crap. That's not good.

I like this story though. You should update it again. It looks like it could be really good.

Wow, that's pretty awesome. O.o
You're creative, too. I thought about making something with the astrological signs, but it was too difficult for me...T_T
Leo, the lion...
Ari, for Aries?
Scorpio...
and what's the deal with the statue? I'm interested now hahaha XD
AND THEY'RE TWINS, how cool!
Leo and Aries are compatible right? That's an awesome storyline you have, but I'm sad that Leo died T_T
-And I actually know where this stuff is taking place...personally, I'm horrible at fitting setting into my stories, but you put it in easily and it flows smoothly!
AWESOME 5 stars...

Oh Mah Gah.

Darling, you have no idea how magnificent this it.

I shed a tear (or two). And just when I thought I was falling for silly adorable Leo too.

oh no. I feel like my heart was torn in two.

and you know what?

I was just browsing through and when I read this, I didn't have an account here. So I just HAD to make one so I can review and just...I want to find out what happens next.

Oh, I see it's genre is Romance. I'm really looking forward to it. Who will Ari fall for?

I really can't wait.

Update soon, yeah?

oh god, talk about killer ending there...0.0
that was very interesting, the funny thing is two of my friends are twins, lol. and they do they exact same thing...well except they don't get thrown into an air ship XP
good good. i liked it. ^^