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Reviews For: If You Want to Get Better You Have to be Cured

Andrea Roycee
2007-11-22
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, I like your use of description, good dialogue, this story was overall a little short but still very good. Sometimes I felt like the voice of the little girl didn't correspond with how she was telling the story but she's telling it from when she's older so i guess it fits. Good write.
don juan banana
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abusethis was the 1st actual SCARY story on this site.. cuz it wasnt about zombies or vampires for once!
Sweet Lemon Effect
2007-11-11
ch 1,
abuseAh , the horrors of child abuse. In the next chapter, I suggest that you have Sophie kill her mother in some nice gruesome way so we can appreciate a sense of justice and fairness in the world.
Tasha Lee
2007-11-11
ch 1,
abuseNow that's just scary.
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