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| Andrea Roycee 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, I like your use of description, good dialogue, this story was overall a little short but still very good. Sometimes I felt like the voice of the little girl didn't correspond with how she was telling the story but she's telling it from when she's older so i guess it fits. Good write. |
| don juan banana 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusethis was the 1st actual SCARY story on this site.. cuz it wasnt about zombies or vampires for once! |
| Sweet Lemon Effect 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseAh , the horrors of child abuse. In the next chapter, I suggest that you have Sophie kill her mother in some nice gruesome way so we can appreciate a sense of justice and fairness in the world. |
| Tasha Lee 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abuseNow that's just scary. |