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.,.,.,. 2008-07-06 ch 4, anon.	abuseUpdate soon, this story is awesome!
Satan'z Myth 2008-07-03 ch 4,	abuseGee..I didn't even KNOW this had been updated ! I was checking out my reviews History when - volla! There was an orange flag beside this stories name! I'm totally loving this story, and this chapter was incredible...the characters are really realistic and half the times I feel like giggling like a yaoi-fan-girl :P And, that part with Carlon (?) and Oli is..hot!...And a cliff-hanger gasps I cannot bear the torture - do update soon !
Famirka 2008-06-23 ch 4,	abuseThis is super funny :) please update!
Ramen Noodle 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseThe point of my story is that i'm going to talk about her vampire life and how she turned into one it couldn't be more clear in the preface. I also don't see the point of why people love writing about gay people? This story is just awkward.
etherealrain 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseYay, THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE! I loves this story. LOL, at the end of this story there was an add for a "Dakota rington" I was amused ^_^ You better not make us wait after THAT cliffie!
clowneygirl 2008-06-21 ch 4,	abuseI seriously love this story. For some reason though I just can't shake the feeling that the sister is well aware of what's been going on. I'd hate for her not to be. At this point though I can't help thinking how hot Dakota is and saying screw the sister. lol Can't wait for the next update.
Cosmic Sage 2008-06-19 ch 4,	abuseOMG! I knew you wrote a new chapter days ago and it totally slipped my mind. My internet was shoddy so I wound up [copy/paste]-ing the story to MSWord and making my comments xD Yeah! Because I'm my own bitch! You tell it Jail-bait! On the floor that's probably infested with microscopic butt-bugs! I thought that too! I once thought I got a pimple on my butt from the bugs! Turns out it wasn’t a pimple, but a sore ass—I was 7, how did I know that sitting on a floor all day made you sore? He's probably having disgusting thoughts right now. Remember! It's part of the tactic! SURE And . . . the boy strangely resembles me. That is disgusting! How dare he incorporate me with his sick, twisted fantasies! I would never make out with an Alien! Although, its tongue looks like it could do wonderful things. Oh… His first outer-space porno… Next he’ll be into the real celestial shit :x That actually made me laugh! But it was only a small chuckle, I'm too cool to laugh like an idiot. Reality: GUFAWGUFAWGUFAW! I hate slow-ass people walking in front of me! I feel like moshing my way out! I feel the same way, bruddah… Maybe I should stop. He might think I enjoy flirting with him. Which I don't. Keep tellin’ yourself that, toots.
wake of beauty 2008-06-17 ch 4,	abuseLove it. I wonder what's going to happen next. You suck for ending it there. But you're amazing for writing such amazing material. I absolutely adore this story. :) I haven't read ANYTHING in over a month, but I just had to read your update. xD So feel loved. :)
hobogloves 2008-06-17 ch 4,	abuseYay you updated XD Can't wait for the next chapter I love this story!
Midnights Scream 2008-06-16 ch 4,	abuseDakota is a pretty interesting name. :) it's awesome. Why do I get this vibe that she's not really dating him and is setting him up, because she thinks he's gay? Maybe I'm looking too much into things, but they don't act much like a couple. I like Dakota a lot though. Rock on!
girls will be boys 2008-06-16 ch 4,	abusekyle amuses me. ... yes. [i really, really suck at review stories, sorry.]
Halo Sora 2008-06-15 ch 4,	abuseyay update! Love it! I cant wait for the next part! I bet Dakota is going to kiss him!
Xx-Blue-Eyed-Fey-xX 2008-06-15 ch 4,	abuselmao, i love kyle. he's so funny in all his bitchy sarcasm. can't wait for your next chapter.
narcissistic 2008-06-15 ch 4,	abusefinally a chapter after a long wait of emptyness and dissapointment from you.. but you made up for it so all is good. haha
koerle 2008-06-15 ch 4,	abuseIf the tension was thick before... you need a chainsaw to cut through the tention now. Kyle is playing a "dangerous" game with Dakota. Dakota is obviously a lot better in playing this game... :) Enjoy your holiday next week :)

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