No, not a tragedy! The nice-sounding girl Stacy already ended up being really mean... poor Jasmine... you better not kill her off O_o

GOOD JOB! I've noticed that you're writing has improved a lot! All of the descriptions are really good and vivid, especially how the characters speak. Jasmine's thoughts are also woven in really well. There are just a couple small mistakes, but you'd easily catch them if you read it over. Come up with a direction and then update ;D