way you wear me like a crucifix...wow...how can i say this without sound like a cliche...without sound like a "great work" review...awesome...just awesome i love ur stile i really do.


great job?...just keep it writing girl.

this poem is very good =] excellent job as always.

amazing. i love the last stanza. your poems always have that punch at the end.

Love your first stanze, you're awesome, but of course know this by the huge amount of positive reviews you got back. I'm just another voice lost in the crowd but it's ok.

black and blue memories tattooed across my s(k)in.
i always hate them in the morning
and the way you wear me like a crucifix.


best line in world
your so amazing.
way better than me

wow, i really like this
it's just..wow
the last stanza was beautiful

Touching

Loved the play on the word "sin." Very creative!

-Christine

Wow, great job. Very powerful.

I know the feeling. Excellent poem. Very well written. Good work. Keep writing. = )

beautiful.
it's good to see you writing again as well. I've been trying to find who is writing still and who's given it up or is taking a break. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Wow, beautiful. Twist of meaning of bleeding black and blue memories...and a lovely ending line that gave me a smile. Thank you

Wow. Just...wow. It's powerful. And it describes, perfectly, most of the relationships out there.

i adore the last three lines.
have i mentioned about your amazingness?

-Sunny

Beautiful. So many great lines in this. I like the use of metaphor and imagery. The format is also very effective.

Thanks for the review.