 Takara-Sagara 2008-03-30 . chapter 1Omg i luved it lol, the comedy in this was awesome! |
 girl- reinvented. 2008-01-30 . chapter 1it's the title that grabbed me, because i love funeral for a friend. by much.
this piece is awesome. the ending made me giggle. |
 Rachel 2007-12-21 . chapter 1 How old was the girl?
P.S. This was actually pretty good. Slightly confusing at times. lol
But good none-the-less. :) |
 Cinera 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Why would you call this crap? If it was crap, I would inform you of such. Or maybe I like crap. Because I liked it. I really liked the syntax, it has a nice flow. Is there more? There should be. Really. I mean it. I'd read it. |
 CaseyBear 2007-11-29 . chapter 1That is amazing..
Just to let you know. |
 DeeFective 2007-11-24 . chapter 1Oh, I like it. It was a little hard to follow but interesting none the less. This is a new type of writing style that I've seen. You did a good job though. |
 the big crunch 2007-11-21 . chapter 1well, i like it, even if you think it's crap |
 Alyssa Buck 2007-11-16 . chapter 1 i actually liked even if you didn't it sounds like something that might happen to me one day |
 Kira Kira 2007-11-15 . chapter 1 u suck lol |