|Reviews for plastic bag clouds|
| Natari Mirumura 6/19/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. Again, this poem like another one of yours I read has a unique vibe. Very nice, keep it up :D
| softersin 2/8/09 . chapter 1
you definitely have a way with words.
| guerillero 1/10/09 . chapter 1
Siouxsie is orgasmic.
And so is this poem.
| MagicalThinking 11/29/08 . chapter 1
I LOVE HOW YOU ORGANIZED THIS. It's a wonderfully eccentric little piece; like I said in the previous review... I love simplicity in poems; because it makes you think, yet gives you just enough imagery to get the feel of it.. This one does the same; I actually picked it back of its interesting title xp
Keep up the awesome writing! _
| 012323232 3/28/08 . chapter 1
this may have turned out bad, but you made it happen
| LIPSTICKFLAMINGOSROCKROLL 3/22/08 . chapter 1
WOW! awesome. I love the way you formatted it. It gave the poem alot more emphasis!
| fatbird33 2/25/08 . chapter 1
very creative style
| the naked civil servant 2/16/08 . chapter 1
O, Siouxsie. Formatting reminds me of the lyrics to SWITCH on the album sleeve of The Scream. Was that the reference? I'm sorry, I'm very tired. Anyway, I like it very much. It makes me want to read it again, if you get my meaning, which in my humble view is high praise indeed. "a cheap imitation of sleep". O the empathic irony. Love love love.
| xfail 11/17/07 . chapter 1
You have very interesting imagery here, and I like it. The lines "pretending
it really is the
the clock' eyes." are amazing, and the format is very creative. Good job!
| kelsi bones 11/17/07 . chapter 1
This is really beautiful. I like the way you isolated some of the words (sing, lights, pretending, and mechanical). It adds a nice form to the poem.
| Twilight Starr 11/16/07 . chapter 1
Interesting piece. I like the title, but I really don't get the concept. No worries that happens to me sometimes with poetry. It can have so many different meanings.
| this is britt 11/13/07 . chapter 1
first of all, RYAN ADAMS IS AMAZING, thank you. secondly- this sets a beautiful, almost misty, kind of freakish tone. and it's great. honestly- you don't overdo it.
| sylvia's syndrome 11/12/07 . chapter 1
I loved this. The images are fantastic. I really liked your choice of format as well. Excellent work. Keep up the great work!
| Chidori Nadare 11/12/07 . chapter 1
I love the format, structure and wording choices. I'm afraid I can't exactly grasp the real meaning of this but this is a delightful read.
| t-t-t-ouch 11/11/07 . chapter 1
wow, i love the formation,
and the structure,
and the wording.