Reviews for Lady of the Night

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Lady of Secrets 2008-05-05 ch 29,	abuserelax, okay? your story is fine and we (the reviewers) would tell you if it wasn't. That IS what we're here for, are we not? And besides, your story is actually getting better the more chapters you put up. Not only have your descriptions gotten much mroe sophisticated but your grammer too. Hope to read more, as always.-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-05-02 ch 28,	abuseand into the sand they go...im feeling optimistic too. ^^ nxt chapter should be ver interesting! Btw, I like how Aly's father's demeanor is slowly changing, but not to much so as to change his complete character.-Salem
Kinna 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseGood prologue, it was very intriguing, although I can't believe he left his daughter there. I was wondering, what happened to the tall thin woman who ran after her?
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-28 ch 26,	abuseomg! Salem of dreams. cool! my name...anywayz, as your usual reviewer, ill keep my usual end of the review going, so plz update again soon. ^^-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-27 ch 25,	abusewere off to see the dragons! the wonderful dragons of oz! Im glad to see that aly seems to be maturing and learning things. Keep going, as always, im waiting for moe.-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-24 ch 24,	abusesomethings gonna happen, i can smell it! and I know you probly didnt want to add in too much detail, but for the unicorns and winged horses, you could have had silver dust and a feather, idk. Just going witht the flow, anywayz, If I were to tell you how much i like this story, I'd be here for ages, and so would you. So instead of leaving the usual review that i do about how amazing this is, I'll tell you...ITS BLOODY BRILLIANT. -Salem
Agility Fool 2008-04-24 ch 24,	abuseThis is a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-23 ch 23,	abusedum dum dum. climax...i can feel it... will be AWESOME! I dont trust mr.im-so-awesome-cuz-i-have-flames. I mean, hmph. Menaie-butt, much? savvy? Any road, cant wait till nxt update.-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-22 ch 22,	abuseo, something is coming...and it is... AWESOME!! Man, if I was a better reviewer i would point things out for you to correct but the only thign is grammer, and I wouldn't want to ruin this story by yakking about grammer all day, as I suppose we all get sick of hearing it. Savvy? Anywayz, You know I absolutely love this story, and thx for dedicating the chapter to me, i feel so special. ^^ also, as always, cant wait for another update.-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-21 ch 21,	abuseomgg! wats gonna happen?!?!? i must know! must...update...grabs ur shirt collar u must update soon! plz! i beg of u! lets go and sits in a corner, rocking back and forth another...chapter...must...know...what..happens... twitches-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-19 ch 18,	abuseur ttly portraying the characters well. uve played the father character excellently and Sadin is well put together too. As for Aly, you can see her grow and its amazing, its what keep severyone reading. Cant wait to read more, as always.-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-18 ch 15,	abusego aly! go aly! shes aweosme, mhm. She gots awesome heritage. nice...I am seriously chomping at the bit to read the rest though! =/ so ill b waiting for an update. Love it so far!-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-09 ch 14,	abusedum dum dum! nxt chapter! w00t! it just keeps getting better and better!-Salem
Lady of Secrets 2008-04-08 ch 13,	abuseomg! awesome! nxt chappie, hurry, plz! im gona die! omg, the suspense!Fantastic, its getting much better with each chapter.-Salem
callmekeller 2008-04-06 ch 13,	abusevery good story, I like the mystery and I look forward to the next installment. Thank you.

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