This is the freakiest thing ever. I love it. Continue?

i heart you. alot for a long time... i u know, i'm tired, and hungry. f... yeah i'm eating now.. and now i'm done but yeah, man this story's awesome man. XD please, updates, i need more. i've been waiting for a good fifteen minutes here and i seriously doubt you've updated. :

dude i love this story :3 The characters are super cool and it's a pretty interesting setting, and as I'm a sucker for a good slash fic I can't wait to see where this goes. I love your writing too (: And Maddie is super cute! Update soon!

I loveth Maddie! He is all cheerleader happy at a homecoming football game. It's makes me happy.

Makes sense that he watches spanish soaps, cause he does sound like the kinda person that would do that just because he's bored. In my own defense I stood about 5 minutes tops with the soaps and I got bored; therefore I don't count in the catagory of people who've watched them. lol. Though soaps are quite fun and easy to poke fun at... XD

Maddie sounds quite insane, but that's also funny. XDD I wonder if anyone will notice that they have the wrong meds and realize it was his fault. that'd be kinda funny. I laughed at the part where Harold said he didn't like him. I was like 'omfg, that's perfect'. XDD I love how Maddie forgot the name of the man he claims to be in love with. That seriously figures. XDD

The update was great, though I think there were a few spelling errors and such, other than that it was funny. Good work, can't wait for the next chapter. =D
-rinnith

haha, that chapter made me laugh. Especially when he stepped in Nacho poo. XDD I could actually imagine a really short person doing that. I feel his pain at being short; I have a bunch of super-freak super tall friends and I'm like 5'4" so when I stand next to them I'm like WOOSH short. Nacho. Seriously. XDD That makes me laugh hysterically because whoever named their kid Nacho was obviously a bit too hungry. Is Maddie spanish? Because he speaks a bit in the beginning and I was like... 'he said si...does that mean he speaks spanish?' ;p anyway, great opening chapter, I love how he's like "he's empty..and I love him". That made me grin, because people like that make me chuckle. But anyway can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it's as funny as this one. =D

I love love love this. You're writing style is really unique and I always enjoy it. Please post more!

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P.S. Sorry this review is so short. It's very late at night. And sorry it's so late after you posted.

And when will I be seeing Ezra's story, hmm?

hahahah.
i love it.